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Bioweapon by Komyeta

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I was looking around i saw this picture and you wanted a critique.
I have just 2 major issue and its that bulge where the neck and chest meet. I would fix it bcuz it looks wierd to me like the dragon has a air sack there. Like when a frog croaks and its neck bulges...thats what that reminds me of.

And the second thing is the left leg, if you placed it more inward it would look more natural. Not saying a dragon can't sit like that but the thighs look really spread out mostly with the angle this dragon is sitting.
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Komyeta Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Firstly, thank you very much for you critique, it will definely help me in the future and yeah...

I noticed the mistake on the neck way too late and unfortunaley Im not able to fix it because it is a traditional picture, I dont know what happened there I didnt make that mistake before xD

But also about the Hind Left leg, I didnt noticed it until you pointed and I admit it looks a bit weird, but I dont see it as a mistake, maybe I will need to look at some references because Im not that good at drawing paws hehe

Anyway, thank you again for your critique, I will improve eventually and this will boost it up :)
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FierceFantasy Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol. I'm glad. Don't stop the good work! :D

no the back leg wouldn't exactly be a mistake, true.
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Komyeta Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I will :D
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